Dream Deep

Let's watch the double (...triple) posting and the debates, please. OverEasy has the right of it: this is a forum for lyrical discussion, not for moral argumentation. I suggest, 1993vlad@gmail.com, ...

I read this over a few times, Cade, because I wasn't sure how to take it. I stared at it for a while. I read it again. I read it ...

Hi, zoorah12- I'm one of the moderators of the fiction forum, and your post caught my eye. I have edited out your last name - it is never advisable (even ...

Cade, Poetess Extraordinaire, has already made a note of most of the tricky spots, so I suspect that my visit here will be brief and rather useless. Lack of nit-pickery ...

Hi, ShadowQueen - This is an interesting break from standard fair tale openings - no "once upon a time", even. I bet the Grimm brothers are rolling in their graves. ...

King's quite right. Space this out a bit; revise your punctuation, unnecessary capitalization, et cetera, and you may get a few fair critiques. I'm going to edit out your last ...

Oh Till. I had a whole response written up for you. A major critique. It was glorious. Satan, my computer, ate it. I shall try to recall the jist to ...

Hiya, Sela. I thought I'd be prompt for once in my life and dash over to the literary forums with uncharacteristic speed. Admittedly, I'm just a wee bit out of ...

My dear Till, ...I actually set foot in the literary forums again, just for you. You owe me one. ^^ But of course, one is humanly incapable of staying away ...

... I admit it, openly and freely. I've no criticism whatsoever. I've no long an inspired ramblings about grammar or tense or syntax. I've nothing to do but be absolutely ...

Not a problem, Nikki. :smt001 EDIT : First off all, in the post below, you mention not having very good typing skills. I urge you not to worry too much ...

Friendly Neighborhood Modliness : If you like, Nikki, I can correct the title for you. If ever you have a problem that you're not sure how to fix, you can ...

You know, I heard a song the other day - well, re heard; I've had the album forever, even if I haven't listened to it in a while - that ...

This really gave me chills, haha. I think the quality of your tone and poetry was at its peak in the opening stanza - as the poem went along, it ...

This was sweet. ^_^ Too often, one ends up reading dark and blood-drenched (hyperbole) poetry listing the infinite number of reasons why mothers are the most atrocious creatures to inhabit ...